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katt33

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Jan 23, 2007 3:35 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hello Wonderful SUN Members,

This is a seprate project, not for my business. I hope you will find my site easy to navigate, and overall positive. I will be adding more events etc... I look forward to your comments, which I totally appreciate.

Rev. Katherine

CraigL

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Jan 24, 2007 4:25 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Hi Katt, here`s a screenshot of what I saw. I`m on Mozilla Firefox 1.0, DSL line, and it looks like you may have to do some validation? Did you generate this for Explorer? Or am I somehow missing something?

katt33

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Jan 24, 2007 1:55 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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The www.revappello.org is a seperate project. Nothing to do with Caterina. That site wont be up for a while.

CraigL

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Jan 24, 2007 5:44 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Yes...I didn`t see a link that associated with "this is a separate project," so I just assumed it was under your profile Web site link.

On this other site, it all works. I`d put the "Purpose" from the "Weekly Services" page, on the "Home" page, under the first line about welcome. Then leave the remainder of the Weekly Services page as is.

I`d move the "About Me" button to below "The Trust," and change the face text to "About Us." (Me sounds too ego-driven, and editorial "we" usually works better.)

Remove the "Products" button as it`s useless without any products, and just annoying.

Change "The Trust" to "Our Pledge." A Trust usually calls to mind a financial structure when it doesn`t speak directly to a trusting relationship between people. In this case, the content isn`t about trust. It`s about your pledge.

Navigation was fast and easy, and the colors nice. The contrast was easy for reading, and the site moved quickly. "Please Visit" had a "checkout" at the top that doesn`t make sense. Otherwise, change the face text to "Links."

katt33

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Jan 24, 2007 8:10 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Will Do. I am glad it was easy navigation. Thank You so much. I did add products, as yeah it is silly wihout actual products and added a services page.

gdernie

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Jan 25, 2007 3:52 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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It`s easy to navigate
May need some more images on the detials page
The blog background is distracting
Overall simple, i like it. It could need a little more graphics.

http://www.graphicdesign-s.com/

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Ernie GD Solutions www.graphicdesign-s.com

katt33

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Jan 26, 2007 5:04 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I agree with you. I may take out the blog for now. I know nothing of graphic design and unfortunately, budget too tight right now, but I know that will soon not be the case. Could I then contact you for this?

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