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Thank you for your feedback, it was appreciated and the site was updated. It is now a bit more appealing and contains more information. Any additional input would be appreciated.

I think your message and service comes across much better this time around .... good work.

The links in the lower area are too light and difficult to read. The links in the menu could be a bit bolder; they almost are too pale to really stand out.



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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons

This looks really good! I would eliminate one word, to make your business exactly clear:
You can lose the "mortgage" because it sounds too much as if you offer bank loans, or you refinance mortgages. Removing that word makes what you do focus on "field services." Then you can spend content on a sales pitch about field services and what they are.

When you use acronyms like REO (they don`t use apostrophes), you always should spell them out at least the first time. Otherwise people won`t know that you`re talking about the rock band, REO Speedwagon.

Otherwise, your "clicked" links almost disappear so color adjustment would help, as Webline mentioned above.

I really like your link to the map of Northeast Ohio. However, if you know how to do it, I think a pop-up map in a window would be more helpful. That way people can return more easily to the sentence and continue reading. If you don`t know the tools, then perhaps put a "Back to Home Page" link below the map itself.

Definitely a lot better than the original. :-)