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4seasonsllc

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Dec 24, 2008 1:07 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi, let me just start with introducing myself. My name is Justin and I own a Landscaping Company. Recently I have started a new business handling foreclosures for banks, cleanouts, evictions, etc. I started a website to help market this business. I used vista print to help me design a very basic website that I know is lacking to say the least. And when I google it I can`t find it. I know I`m supposed to be specific about what I`m asking for but I.m really not sure what I`m in need of.  Any help, comments, suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thank you very much. 4 Seasons Property Management LLC our web url is www.4seasonspmllc.com
Jmes

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Dec 24, 2008 3:39 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hi Justin
Welcome to the forum
While visiting your site for the first time I have a few questions and suggestions
1. Your home page is short and to the point, while this looks very professional it`s less eye-catching. you should consider your target audience, if this look appeals more to them then keep it, if not you should consider about adding some eye candy
2. The text on the main page goes "..will be foreclosed in the next 13 months" you should give a date in the end of that. something like "..will be foreclosed in the next 13 months, (stated on this-and-that journal, 11/11/08)" or something a bit more creative than that
3. In the contact section you don`t give out your email, you should add that option, what have you got to lose? :-)
4. On the main page, the buttons on top don`t really look like buttons.. just text... I`d think of a button.jpg to put there
5. I`d put a menu on to left side, something like the one on the top of the pages
6. I`d give an example or some quotes to make the user feel you`re an existing business with vast experience
7. About search engine appearance .. I`d check around for that, there are many things you can do to be placed in Google even in the first pages.. I haven`t researched your market but I think you should spent a few hours on learning what are your options, both free and non-free services, tools and companies.
One method I usually recommend, one that is fast and easy, is creating personal online profiles for you and your staff. Services which specialize in getting yours and your staff`s personal pages on google, and linking back to your company. There are several out there, though the one I recommend is www.lookuppage.com

Hope I helped, and wish you the best of luck

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Jmes

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Dec 24, 2008 4:10 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Forgot to add, if you have any further questions or just want to contact me, feel free to email :-)

Jmes



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CraigL

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The key problem is what you think you`re selling, and what you actually seem to be saying you`re selling. They don`t match, and it`s mostly because of semantics---a messed up use of language.

As such, the solution is fairly easy....fix your language. :-D

Everywhere I looked, both in your post and on your Web site, you spend all your time discussing a) Foreclosures, and b) Property Management.

The implication of those two terms is that you are a real-estate company, specializing in selling foreclosures.

It was only when I persisted and clicked on the Services tab that I at last began to understand what you mean by "property management."

The way I`d refocus the entire marketing campaign is to start with simple terms and "visual" words. Look at your Services page, because that should be your home page, it should be on all your materials, and should be everywhere you go and in almost everything you speak or write.

You`re NOT a "property management" company. You`re a property "caretaker" company. The offer and benefit of your company is to keep pipes from freezing, make sure the lawn is mowed, keep an eye on things, report broken windows, and so forth.

You "happen to" also be able to verify that an owner has vacated a property, that it is indeed sitting empty, and the condition of that property to people in distant locations. You "happen" to be able to take photographs for realtors, and offer other services that require a physical human being to actually visit the real property.

A property manager is a rental agent.

So that`s the first thing. The second thing is to learn about such things as SEO and search-engine marketing. You can do that here on SuN via the forums. Your goal is to learn enough to be able to tell when someone you hire will help you, or they`re just sharks feeding in the waters.

Word-of-mouth is going to be an excellent opportunity for you, so you`ll want to print up a nice trifold pamphlet and mail it to every real-estate agent in your local area...however far out you want to go. That`ll get you some revenues, and perhaps recommendations.

From there you can expand, talking with any realtor you get to know. They`ll explain how you can find out names and addresses for real estate agents and agencies everywhere in the country. A combination of a professional Web site, and some sort of direct-mail advertising likely would help.
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Dec 25, 2008 1:18 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Hmm... google 4 Seasons Property Management and there is such a site with that name - but it`s not yours. the domain is almost identical (with out the "llc" at the end).
 
Unless you are that other company... you might want to get a different domain name? One that uses one or more of your targeted ketwords...related to your services.
 
As for SEO... the vista print produced site is not the best. Plus it seems like your targeted keywords are "4 seasons property management".
 
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4seasonsllc

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Dec 26, 2008 1:16 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Okay, thank you for your feedback, its helped a lot. The name of the business is now 4 Seasons Preservation Maintenance LLC. It better describes my industry and what exactly I do. And best of all I can still use the same url. All the initials are the same. Also I have made some updates to the website and it looks much better. Thank you, Justin
caricc

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Dec 26, 2008 2:21 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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Justin nice site. But I do have a question about your services page. When I pass over the picture shown next to each description on the page. I get a change of my arrow to a link icon. It`s saying click here. When I do click it just brings up a larger picture of the same. You could either re-size the picture used or if you mean to add more information to each section then the links may be broken. Also if that is the case you may want to also add links to the title of each section. The pictures do this through out the site.

On your home page you state: "
...long list of satisfied clients attest to our superior workmanship, attention to detail, clear communication, honesty and integrity. " If you were to put just a few letters of these satisfied clients that would help a lot. May be sprinkle a few on each page.

Also on the home page: "
We offer a wide array of mortgage field services to.. ." as stated above by CraigL, it`s a semantic thing but I think you should drop the work "mortgage" from this sentence.

Overall I like the site. Keep up the good work
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caricc12/26/2008 2:27 AM
vwebworld

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Dec 26, 2008 3:31 AM ET    Quote  Report Abuse
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To follow up on Caricc`s post.........
There is no need to have those images link to an image or larger image. I`d suggest eliminating the links.
 
You should add alt image tags to every image on your site. Those tags should be relevant to the image and your targeted keywords.
 
Re: SEO - While having the company name in the title of each page is ok... there is not a lot of search engine benefit.... unless you expect people to do a search for your company name.
Also since you serve a geographic area, you would benefit from including that in your page title and other SEO tags (it is in your page description).
 
It would be good to add some h1 h2 tags with keywords in the content of each of your pages.
To me it seems the most important page for search results is your "services" page. My guess is those are the search terms people may use to find some one that provides services like yours. So, I would certainly use h1 or h2 tags for the title of each service and you might think about adding a list of those services on your home page... maybe with links to you services page or at least h1 or h2 tags.
 
Ultimately, you`ll realize better search results is you have a separate page for each service with a link to each using the service`s keyword and the title of each service age using the same keywords.
 
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