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As an elevator pitch this does not hit the mark...its the 'pitch' to the consumer, which is a different proposition.

So if you were in an elevator and had 30 seconds to get an investor interested you would tackle....

1) Why the consumer wants your product

2) How you will meet the demand

3) How you will manufacture your product

4) What additional products you intend to launch to build your business.

I would focus on those questions to investors in a 30 second pitch...

unless your purpose was to promote your product and NOT to test an investor elevator pitch ;)

Andrew

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