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sbasly

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Mar 08, 2009 1:27 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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1st site is mine...underconstruction...please critque home page. and my original graphics..

www.picturemyheart.com

2nd... Please review the website I did for my current employer...includes mostly graphics I created. www.xdata.com

3rd. Just getting into animation see my animated video "Obama`s Political Economy" on my utube site at: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HRZ5IJfHtMQ or

http://www.youtube.com/BigBenBallsy

getting into political cartoons..wonder if I can attract people to the picturemyheart personalized gift site with them...or just start my own cartoon animation site... any comments/advise?

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Stephen

Stephen M. Basly, Pres., Picture~My~Heart
sbasly@sbcglobal.net

More Than A Clock... It`s ART! ClockART by Picture-My-Heart (www.picturemyheart.com).

I create Original Art,and Custom Personalized Clocks & Framed Prints (from your photo`s or digital images, forming a composite design with text and background).
THE GIFT FOR GIVING! Very UNIQUE!!
www.picturemyheart.com

menexis

posts: 50

Mar 08, 2009 2:22 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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For the picturemyheart.com site, I think you are focusing too much on SEO instead of designing the site for aesthetics for the viewer. Other than that it a site it is easy to navigate and usability is good. I would have had all the pages using the sample temple b/c it looks like you are on a different site when you click on the links

Webline

posts: 687

Mar 08, 2009 2:35 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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First site, I agree with the above comment about a template ..... plus you`re using IFrames, and the coding is terrible.

Second site looks much nicer, but still IFrames, and still terrible code.

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CraigL

posts: 9051

Mar 08, 2009 7:00 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Quick question...are you the fella who last year was having troubles in Michigan and had to move out of state to stay afloat?

banzaibert

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Mar 08, 2009 11:45 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I like the 2nd website than the first one. looks very professional and clean. I`m kinda disappointed with picturemyheart. I was actually expecting the site to be more artsy2x since it is all about art. Maybe make another montage and compare it with the current one, I don`t know but it does not appeal to me that much.

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sbasly

posts: 16

Mar 09, 2009 3:38 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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yep...Craig it is I... still trying to stay afloat in indiana. At least for now,I have a job.

Steve B.

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