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this is the first page that is pretty much completed on my website i will use to market the web with.

www.justMEworld.com

thank you all, i took note to your feedback.

ya page is still in draft because its no near completion. i`m not a marketing guru so i don`t know how to do this stuff and make it look like SHAZAAAM!

i just have an idea, that is it and i need help to build it out.

i am a business. i am wanting to do good but also at the same time get paid for my efforts, like a business does, right?

i will try as soon as possible to post up the screenshots of the site had already made for me

If I could figure out what it is that you`re trying to accomplish - I`d happily give you a hand rewriting the intro page and condensing the text to 1-2 pointed paragraphs that give a couple of call-to-action statements.

Might i recommend a different font for your banner image? You`re sending me mixed messages by coupling those images with a font that signifies "playfulness".
Also, you need to give equal spacing to the top three images that are grouped together.

Edit: Click Here to see a quick mockup i did. I aligned the images correctly, gave them a black border (1 pixel thick) to accent the dark red you have going, and use a plain font with a slight darkened gradation going from bottom to top. The font should be plain in nature to give a cold emotionless reaction, as the emotions are already being derived by the imagery. If you`re interested in using the new banner, feel free to get it Here (and its 100 kb smaller than your original).

Way too wordy.  Few people will read that much text. 


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Steve Mann
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MannMade Digital Video
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I know it is a little difficult, or maybe really difficult to understand me. English is the 3rd language that I have learned so its not my forte.

NCD: Yes, I would like to you to do that, I will speak with you soon. I will do re-read tonight when I come home.

Jarrod: Thank you for your suggestion. I will use your image that you have provided, thank you.