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				<title><![CDATA[Thank you all who have replied.&]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thank you all who have replied.&#160; I have informed the owner of these suggestions and we can look forward to these changes in the next month.&#160; ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Jan 2009 17:06:58 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I agree. The word "owning" sound]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I agree. The word "owning" sounds a bit awkward. The website is full of excellent information but it does&#160;need some sprucing up. Maybe try less text more graphics.
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				<title><![CDATA[
  consider maybe "business own]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  consider maybe "business ownership".&#160; "owning" is a strange word.&#160; 
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				<pubDate>Wed, 14 Jan 2009 17:06:58 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Two problems I have with it, as ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Two problems I have with it, as a writer. The first is that it`s almost entirely written in passive voice. "Business Owning" is a great name for a company, but when used in day-to-day conversation, I don`t understand why you can`t just say, "owning a busin[...]]]></description>
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