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		<title>the first page of my site,</title>
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		<description>the first page of my site,</description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I know it is a little difficult,]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/the-first-page-of-my-site.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[I know it is a little difficult, or maybe really difficult to understand me. English is the 3rd language that I have learned so its not my forte. 
NCD: Yes, I would like to you to do that, I will speak with you soon. I will do re-read tonight ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Way too wordy.&#160; Few people ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Way too wordy.&#160; Few people will read that much text.&#160; ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[



Might i recommend a diff]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[



Might i recommend a different font for your banner image? You`re sending me mixed messages by coupling those images with a font that signifies "playfulness".Also, you need to give equal spacing to the top three images that are grouped together.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[If I could figure out what it is]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[If I could figure out what it is that you`re trying to accomplish - I`d happily give you a hand rewriting the intro page and condensing the text to 1-2 pointed paragraphs that give a couple of call-to-action statements.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[thank you all, i took note to yo]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[thank you all, i took note to your feedback.
ya page is still in draft because its no near completion. i`m not a marketing guru so i don`t know how to do this stuff and make it look like SHAZAAAM! 
i just have an idea, that is it ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  First: you need to proof rea]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  First: you need to proof read. There are alot of typo problems. Here are a few:
  &#160;
  "first company that came came together "
  "We could have gone go to a venture capitalist "
  "By on the top]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[this is the first page that is p]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/the-first-page-of-my-site.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[this is the first page that is pretty much completed on my website i will use to market the web with.
www.justMEworld.com]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:23:44 GMT</pubDate>
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