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		<title>revised letter for critique</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Once I get those samples and the]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Once I get those samples and then have samples of the bottles, I would love to put the line on greenbeans and work with you to see how we can both benefits from each other`s dream.
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				<title><![CDATA[I will be mailing it to spas and]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I will be mailing it to spas and shops that sell herbs and such. &#160;I am compiling my list and just have to verify addresses and who management is. &#160;I was just offered the chance to have my own line and the products (perfume, lotion etc...) are gua[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 8 Jan 2009 15:15:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I have another question though, ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I have another question though, why do you start the email with the contact information? shouldn`t it be posted in the end?
Jmes]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Katt, 
I just looked at your or]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Katt, 
I just looked at your original post and this is an outstanding rewrite. 
Have you defined your initial product line(s)? Are you demonstrating and/or catalog selling? Don`t forget samples!
Your product looks bea]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 8 Jan 2009 15:15:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Katherine;
  how are you in]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Katherine;
  how are you intending to get this in front of people? are you doing a mailing or email campaign?
  &#160;
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				<pubDate>Thu, 8 Jan 2009 15:15:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[the doman is actually www.wholes]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[the doman is actually www.wholesalekanyc.com
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				<pubDate>Thu, 8 Jan 2009 15:15:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[

  
    
      K.A.N.Y.C.
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				<description><![CDATA[

  
    
      K.A.N.Y.C.
Enterprises
    
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