press release critique, hit me with it. http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm press release critique, hit me with it. Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT <![CDATA[ I am postponing the charity ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720038 <![CDATA[ Katherine.   Unde]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720037 <![CDATA[ Dale: It does seem like m]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720036 <![CDATA[ Dale:   It does s]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720035 <![CDATA[I am going to get someone to wor]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720034 <![CDATA[ Great job Dale!  Your app]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720033 <![CDATA[Great job Dale!  Your appro]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720032 <![CDATA[ Hi Dale,   T]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720031 <![CDATA[ Dale: I thought your head]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720030 <![CDATA[ Dale:   I thought]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm Fri, 22 Feb 2008 15:29:50 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/press-release-critique-hit-me-with-it.htm#720029