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		<title>please critique my new errand running website</title>
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May I ask why all the pages ar]]></title>
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May I ask why all the pages are in flash?Good eye - I didn`t catch that.All Flash - badSo are web sites that are all images.&nbsp; The search engines have nothing to index so you are lucky to ever ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thank you so much for the commen]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thank you so much for the comments. I`m changing the shoe to a slide show of luxury pictures. let me know what you think.
&nbsp;
aaronerrands
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				<title><![CDATA[May I ask why all the pages are ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[May I ask why all the pages are in flash?&nbsp; There really isn`t anything "flashy" (like the other web site) going on and it will hurt you in the search engines.&nbsp; I would go to straght HTML if you can.
The high heel shoe threw me... I`d a]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Let`s not get TOO carried away w]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Let`s not get TOO carried away with the belief that $250K is a high-end
income! These days, with two-person incomes, it`s not that unusual.

However, you definitely have to envision the sort of chaos taking place
in a family like that. On the o]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[You know it`s funny because I ju]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[You know it`s funny because I just reread this thread ... I hadn`t read the full intro earlier. (I confess, I skim too much.)I didn`t catch the "$250K" part. I agree the business strategy is off, as well as the look of the website, for that market.]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I think that you are on to somet]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I think that you are on to something, but your marketing is misguided.&nbsp; Just my opinion, but you`re trying to serve wine and cheese using a beer and chips menu.You are targeting the high income clients, so you have to appeal to what they expec]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Aaronserrands,It`s a great websi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Aaronserrands,It`s a great website if you do it yourselves. It`s working for right now. Like CampSteve said "easy to navigate". It`s always something need to be improved right? My wife and I are doing the same business like you do. So don`t give up]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[The shoe is throwing me off.That]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[The shoe is throwing me off.That, and the pictures on the bottom seem slightly squished, like they are not proportioned right.
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				<title><![CDATA[I think the copywriting needs he]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I think the copywriting needs help, as it`s a bit confusing. Setting
aside the actual language, which could use an editor, it doesn`t really
drive home your specific message. 

Okay, I get the idea that You work, I play. The problem is.....I do]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Overall it looks pretty good and]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Overall it looks pretty good and is easy to navigate.&nbsp; I thought the `services/rates` page could use a little more pizazz.&nbsp; The rest of the pages have some sort of graphic element while that page is text only.&nbsp; At least put a simple box arou[...]]]></description>
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