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		<title>please Critique  my site again</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[I think you`ll find that the wor]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I think you`ll find that the wording and the layout are integral, and
can`t easily be split apart, especially on a main landing page.
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				<title><![CDATA[
  I agree with what your sayin]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  I agree with what your saying Craig and as I have said over and over in my post I am going to outsource the wording and final of the web site. Just wanted to get a basic layout, something close to what I had in mind then let the outsource take it ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Mm...I`ve read the above, seen t]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Mm...I`ve read the above, seen the site, and thought I`d comment on the
overall problem of trying to build a Web site on your own. It`s really
a question of delegating to your weaknesses, and it pretty much seems
that marketing is one of your weaknesses[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Thank you M Hall I will work]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Thank you M Hall I will work on that tonight. Some great advise there Thank you again. 
  &#160;
  Ok, changed the top left picture to one of a woman sitting at a computer and holding a credit card. Trying to kinda tie the ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Your main image is a lady with]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Your main image is a lady with shopping bags. You`re not really selling shopping, in my opinion, you`re selling a shopping tool in the form of a PC program. I think the main pa]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  No problem Stan about the ro]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  No problem Stan about the roughness I need it. The program is downloadable or can be sent out on disk either way, it is a monthly price for the program and it does take a code to activate it and is check per month on the date you singed up so if t]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Not to jump on your back or ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Not to jump on your back or kick you while your down, BUT, how it works, and increase sales are the same. both need some proof reading the grammar is as if english was a second language for the author.
  I am not tecky so all I can hel]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Well I am makeing what chang]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Well I am makeing what changes I can myself right now but like I said in the post above I will be getting some one to do the rewrite for the content of the web site.
  &#160;
  I have bought some more stock photos and put t]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Imoral, everything that Darr]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Imoral, everything that Darren says is true. However, I don`t think that you need to necessarily hire a website designer. The right website template can remedy most of your design issues. But you should definitely&#160;consult with&#160;a marketin]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 1 Feb 2008 20:45:23 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Well guess all I can say to ]]></title>
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  Well guess all I can say to that is thanks for being upfront and brunt about it. 
  &#160;
  Ok made those changes, thats what I get for doing this with no sleep. Only two fonts on the page now and all the links are one siz]]></description>
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