copy critique please. http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm copy critique please. Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT <![CDATA[ for a forum gadfly you]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745175 <![CDATA[I don`t intend to be mean.  ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745174 <![CDATA[This brings up a problem that ac]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745173 <![CDATA[ Thanks Loren   te]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745172 <![CDATA[Hire a pro.... you need serious ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745171 <![CDATA[ Thanks Steve   I ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745170 <![CDATA[ Thanks dave...   ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745169 <![CDATA[ Hey Bob, You`re very welc]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745168 <![CDATA[The copy stinks - what I read of]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745167 <![CDATA[A few notes... Am I the only re]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:04:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/copy-critique-please.htm#745166