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		<title>Would love to hear your input!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Make that a short and sweet vide]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Make that a short and sweet video!]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[The "internet marketer" format o]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[The "internet marketer" format of the page really turned me off. I took one look at the length and all the words and just didn`t feel like reading all of it! It follows the same format as all internet marketing pages ... too much sales pitch, too many word[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I thought, why should I do it? W]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[I thought, why should I do it? Who`s really going to see my informational video there rather than on YouTube? I did read the entire page, but it was tough. I also agree with CraigL... You say, "show them." Then you tell it instead of show it. The example v[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[CraigL,
I have to agree with yo]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[CraigL,
I have to agree with you. You learn to tell them what you are going to tell, tell them, and then tell them what you told them. I think information scattered with no true flow. People will start asking themselves why should I give this pe]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Here`s the link as a click: "Sho]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Here`s the link as a click: "Show the World"

My gripe is that there`s this big statement in the middle of the page,
"Don`t tell `em, Show them!" But the whole page ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Yeah, I actually had a hard time]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Yeah, I actually had a hard time reading it.  I read the first paragraph but lost interest.  Most people simply don`t want to take that time to read a pitch to them.  I`m not interested in video ads but if I should be, you didn`t expla]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Just a quick note. There are 101]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Just a quick note. There are 1012 words on the landing page. 
The style is very hard sell and pushy. Might want to tone down a bit.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Decent copywriting but far too m]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Decent copywriting but far too many words. I don`t think very many people will read that entire page because of the word count. 
Break this up into multiple pages.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sat, 3 Mar 2007 16:00:39 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Yes, we are just launching http:]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Would-love-to-hear-your-input.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Yes, we are just launching http://www.showtheworldyoururl.com where we offer people a FREE slot in our new Internet Video Business Directory. I would be curious to know if you understand what we are offering and how it works as we are finding people that j[...]]]></description>
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