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		<title>Whole Site Critique Please</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Then the last sentence says: H]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Then the last sentence says: How are you taking on life?
That
locks in your own view that "take on life" is an action not a
contemplation. If you ended with "What`s your take on life?" then you`d
be locking i]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[LOL! Oh great! Now I can call my]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[LOL! Oh great! Now I can call my mom and tell her that I`m ruining people`s lives by suggesting they work far into the night.&nbsp; Nah...I know what you mean about revisions. I`m not so g]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[What I`d like to see in the firs]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[What I`d like to see in the first sentence on the first page is a better connection to the expression. You can do that I think by moving the "Are you taking on life?" from the bottom to the top. Let it be its own paragraph.
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				<title><![CDATA[I agree with CraigL that the "Ta]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I agree with CraigL that the "Take on Life" phrase is not descriptive enough, but other than that the site is great.&#160; Simple, not cluttered, easy to navigate.&#160; The lemon logo works perfectly.&#160; The story is inspiring a]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[The problem, language-wise, is t]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[The problem, language-wise, is that "Take on Life" is ambiguous. It might be, "What`s your take on life?" Context being how do you feel about this thing called life.
Or it might be "embrace life" with courage, confidenc]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I agree with CraigL that the "Ta]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whole-Site-Critique-Please.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[I agree with CraigL that the "Take on Life" phrase is not descriptive enough, but other than that the site is great.&#160; Simple, not cluttered, easy to navigate.&#160; The lemon logo works perfectly.&#160; The story is inspiring and I wish you a lot of s[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[The problem, language-wise, is t]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whole-Site-Critique-Please.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[The problem, language-wise, is that "Take on Life" is ambiguous. It might be, "What`s your take on life?" Context being how do you feel about this thing called life.Or it might be "embrace life" with courage, confidence, and gusto.It`s that]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks everyone for the positive]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thanks everyone for the positive comments!
On my system it seemed that the "shop" page loaded very slowly, but that could be just today`s DSL connection.

Thanks, I`ll look into this.]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I like the clean look, sparse an]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I like the clean look, sparse and to the point. On my system it seemed that the "shop" page loaded very slowly, but that could be just today`s DSL connection.What I`d like to see in the first sentence on the first page is a better connection to the]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[First of all, after reading your]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[First of all, after reading your story, I want to say it`s pretty inspiring what you`ve gone on to do, and understand the personal aspect behind this. Hats off to you.
You have a simple message, and the site works because you don`t make it mor]]></description>
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