What’s wrong ... or right ... with this Press Release? http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm What’s wrong ... or right ... with this Press Release? Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT <![CDATA[Eric -Exactly - and luckily I`m ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643068 <![CDATA[Eric -Exactly - and luckily I`m ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643067 <![CDATA[LogoMotives, Excellent summary ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643066 <![CDATA[Eric,  great Job. I know w]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643065 <![CDATA[Here`s some press release writin]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643064 <![CDATA[Ok I`m going to make this painfu]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643063 <![CDATA[ Hello Thanks for the feed]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643061 <![CDATA[Besides being poorly written, th]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643060 <![CDATA[I found this Press Release for a]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm Mon, 24 Apr 2006 20:37:11 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Whats-wrong--or-right--with-this-Press-Release.htm#643059