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		<title>What a pleasure to have a critique!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi Steve - 
ok - moving text - ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi Steve - 
ok - moving text - amateurish - 
Any suggestions on what to use to draw the viewer to the idea the moving text is trying to capture? Moving text is to draw attention to the idea suggested so there is a Purpose!!
&nbsp]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Steve, I see the "crawl" now..]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Steve, I see the "crawl" now.... I`ll change the speed of the moving text! I never thought about the view of it with -"in seconds" .My suggestion was to get rid of the crawl - all moving text - altogether.&nbsp; It s]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Steve, I see the "crawl" now....]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Steve, I see the "crawl" now.... I`ll change the speed of the moving text! I never thought about the view of it with -"in seconds" .
Thanks Craig.&nbsp; I knew about putting the font into graphic image. On The home page above the flying bird is ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[A Web browser only shows text in]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[A Web browser only shows text in whatever typeface-font happens to be
available on machine used by the person who`s viewing the page. Ergo,
if you choose a font that doesn`t exist on someone else`s machine, the
browser will substitute with a "best guess[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Steve, what is "crawling text"]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Steve, what is "crawling text"? I really have no clue.... does this have to do with the copy on first page or keywords that help site crawl the web?Any text that moves horizontally across a page is called a "c]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks for the insights everyone]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thanks for the insights everyone, always room for improvement.
Steve, what is "crawling text"? I really have no clue.... does this have to do with the copy on first page or keywords that help site crawl the web?
Ok, I love my flapping bi]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Definitely needs help in the c]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Definitely needs help in the copywriting department. Try to avoid
referring to yourself as "The Merry Bird" knows this, does that, and so
forth. Just use "We," and you`ll be fine.

Too many font changes for my taste, and the animation doesn`t]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I agree that the scrolling and f]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I agree that the scrolling and flapping is distracting rather than helpful.

I really like your product ... I just think you need some copywriting
work to be able to express that better. You are not getting across what
makes you uniquely you on]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Overall, I like your site.&nbsp;]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Overall, I like your site.&nbsp; The red background is a bit harsh, but that`s just me.Your animated logo should be much smaller because the motion is distracting.&nbsp; Finally I absolutely hate crawling text.
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				<title><![CDATA[Please Critique my website]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Please Critique my website]]></description>
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