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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks guys!&nbsp; Great Advice.]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thanks guys!&nbsp; Great Advice. I changed it up a
bit.&nbsp; Have a look if you have time and as always thanks again.

Ah hah! That`s way better! :-D

To follow up on Webline`s comment, there seems to be a ge]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[ProfessorRainmaker. I hate to br]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[ProfessorRainmaker. I hate to break it to you but your posts frequently contain the wrong advice and misinformation - and this post is no exception.&nbsp;Your critique contains a lot of misinformation and suggestions that are completely wrong for the co]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hello gang!&nbsp; I developed a ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hello gang!&nbsp; I developed a website through Windows Office Live for my dad`s business.&nbsp; Please let me know what you think.www.cleanact.netThanks!GD8N 

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				<title><![CDATA[Brilliant. Excellent. You really]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Brilliant. Excellent. You really did&nbsp;an outstanding job implementing those revisions. A few more pics might be nice - but I am very impressed with your work. I am thinking about what I might suggest to improve your call to action. ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  
  
  
    I would sugges]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  
  
  
    I would suggest changing the all blue font; make it darker, vary it, bolder, something .... make it more readable. Make it more inter]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks guys!&#160; Great Advice.]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thanks guys!&#160; Great Advice. I changed it up a bit.&#160; Have a look if you have time and as always thanks again.
]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
I don`t get the idea of the gr]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
I don`t get the idea of the green picture in the middle top of the home
page. You could probably find a much better picture, I think.

I`d also lose the "Welcome to Clean ACT" and just go with the tagline
itself. That`s much stronger, as peop]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Well it`s&nbsp;a good effort. Th]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Well it`s&nbsp;a good effort. The copywriting is pretty good, especially if you`re a novice, and the site isn`t too bad. Besides the basic contact information, a web site is designed to communicate to a prospective customer so that the customer can dete]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hello gang!&#160; I developed a ]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Website-Critique-please-oh-please.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Hello gang!&#160; I developed a website through Windows Office Live for my dad`s business.&#160; Please let me know what you think.
www.cleanact.net
Thanks!
GD8N]]></description>
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