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		<title>This time, I wish to be inundated with responses Please!!!!!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[It`s a service business =&gt; it]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[It`s a service business =&gt; it`s pretty hard to find VC for it.&nbsp; Angels don`t normally invest over 500K-1M.Other than that, Kawasaki`s suggested format is pretty standard.Also because of new service business concept, revenue stream m]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Yes, I found it very confusing. ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Yes, I found it very confusing.  It wasn`t until the third paragraph that I understood that you were even talking about beauty products and wellness centers.  What is VLCC?  (Maybe I should know.)Does your business already exist]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Katherine
Your executive summar]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Katherine
Your executive summary goes right to details that are completely foreign to me.&nbsp; Unless your investors are friends and family that have a great deal of context around what you are trying to say, you need to reorganize the informat]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[If you were investors, please be]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[If you were investors, please be kind enough to respond everyone, would this summary convince you to invest.&nbsp; If not, please all readers tell me why not!!!! It was deflating that so many people read, but did not give feedback, as I desperately need]]></description>
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