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		<title>Tell me how to make it better...please!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thank you so much for the replie]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thank you so much for the replies so far, you guys are great.
I will address all of the issues you have pointed out.
Have a good day!
Tami]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi Tami :-)
Your site has, what]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi Tami :-)
Your site has, what I think is a fairly common problem, where it
attempts to sell a professional service but does it too simplistically.

I don`t like to see too many questions in a lead-in page. It makes it
too much of a myste]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Visually, it`s a nice site.&nbsp]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Visually, it`s a nice site.&nbsp; Some of the images are under the text slightly, but it`s not bad.&nbsp; I would give you a 9 for presentation.Problems:1) There`s no call to action on the home page.&nbsp; You need a "Click Here to get started"]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[In Firefox, the text at the bott]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[In Firefox, the text at the bottom is overlapping, where the font changes.Otherwise, I think the site is cute. I think you did what you could with limited text. I have mixed feeling with opening with question marks ... but I think it works here.]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I just got my Life Coaching webs]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I just got my Life Coaching website up and running and have tweaked it a hundred times already.
I would really appreciate some constructive criticism on how to improve it.
Thanks in advance.
Peace,
Tami&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&]]></description>
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