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				<title><![CDATA[Boy, I dunno Darrel. As I said, ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Boy, I dunno Darrel. As I said, you`re getting into the financials of a
business, and I`m thinking someone skilled in operations and finance
would have a far more sophisticated vision on this.

I`m wondering if you can pick up one of the commun]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[You wrote:In other words, you`re]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[You wrote:In other words, you`re asking for a very large sum, from what we`ve
seen so far, in relation to what you`re actually doing and what you
intend to do.

Let me phrase this down to it`s most simplistic and general basics, NOT
in any]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Darrel, I think at this point we]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Darrel, I think at this point we`ve moved beyond my expertise which is
primarily examining logic, definitions, and carrying forward what
likely would occur given a set of propositions.

If I understand what you`re saying, you intend to "merge" ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[CraigL,Perhaps I have an approac]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[CraigL,Perhaps I have an approach that demonstrates the ability to create a running, profitable operation and will change the loan category from startup to expanding to a synergistic market.&nbsp; Nutshell description follows for evaluation:Fif]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2007 19:58:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
The Executive summary should b]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
The Executive summary should be no more than about 200 words. :-) So
there`s some work there. Don`t forget to use headings, headings,
headings, headings. Also remember bullet points. (Not the Executive
summary, the whole thing.)

I understan]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2007 19:58:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[CraigL,&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The mo]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[CraigL,&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The money will be used for marketing and first year operations.&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; The startup will be carefully limited to the original county because uncontrolled growth coul]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2007 19:58:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Okay, so you`re a form of manage]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Okay, so you`re a form of management service company. It`s a great
idea, I think, and wouldn`t only apply to affluent people. There also
are folks with a summer home who need that sort of oversight for winter
caretaking.

I guess what I`m thin]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2007 19:58:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I have seen several references i]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I have seen several references in this forum the the "Secret" book.&nbsp; However, when I Googled it there were several by different authors.&nbsp; Who is the author of the one so many of you have referred to?The nutshell mechanics of the business ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2007 19:58:25 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Most Excellent! I`m so glad I he]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Most Excellent! I`m so glad I helped. :-D Having a plan is always good, particularly for those serendipity event. 

As for the bootstrapping, I`m seeing that you`re sort of the middle-man
in this? You`ve mentioned a couple of times having "servi]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[CraigL,I would love to start thi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[CraigL,I would love to start this business in a bootstrapping fashion.&nbsp; That way there would be no debt costs and no equity sharing.&nbsp; However, I have not yet figured out how to get the pricing advantages from the service providers without hav]]></description>
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