Sales page critique needed. http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sales page critique needed. Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT <![CDATA[ Steve,   I do be]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#754005 <![CDATA[ Hey Webline,   T]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#754004 <![CDATA[In a nutshell .... at first glan]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#754003 <![CDATA[ ....  May I ask in refere]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#754002 <![CDATA[I`d feel better if i had some so]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#754001 <![CDATA[ Thanks for the critique, Ste]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#754000 <![CDATA[I think that you need a smaller ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#753999 <![CDATA[ Hello all,   Jim]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm Sat, 11 Jul 2009 6:39:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Sales-page-critique-needed.htm#753998