Request a sales letter critique http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm Request a sales letter critique Mon, 6 Oct 2008 10:38:27 GMT <![CDATA[ Hi, I would cut it down to s]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm Mon, 6 Oct 2008 10:38:27 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm#730006 <![CDATA[ Hi Michael. A few comments ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm Mon, 6 Oct 2008 10:38:27 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm#730005 <![CDATA[Hi Michael. A few comments for ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm Mon, 6 Oct 2008 10:38:27 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm#730004 <![CDATA[Ok, ignore that last post. I`ve ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm Mon, 6 Oct 2008 10:38:27 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm#730003 <![CDATA[ Hi all, I`ve never written ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm Mon, 6 Oct 2008 10:38:27 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Request-a-sales-letter-critique.htm#730002