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		<title>Rate My 30-sec Script</title>
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		<lastBuildDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:41:11 GMT</lastBuildDate>
		
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				<title><![CDATA[@cardcoach
Good point.  You ca]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Rate-My-30-sec-Script.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[@cardcoach
Good point.  You can see our video on our website (mytechteam.net).  We have it already made.  We are basically shortening that up to 30 seconds.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:41:11 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I agree re the catchy first line]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I agree re the catchy first line but I would also do some hard thinking about what pictures or videos are going to be displaying with your voice over.  You want to be sure you attract all the people, both visually and aurally. So before you finalize th]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:41:11 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I would suggest a more catchy fi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I would suggest a more catchy first line.  Maybe:
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				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:41:11 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hello all,
I'm not sure if this]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Rate-My-30-sec-Script.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Hello all,
I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this, but
here goes...We are creating a commercial to be aired on local TV - 30 seconds.
We would like you all to rate our script and give us any ad]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:41:11 GMT</pubDate>
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