Press Release #1 Critique Appreciated http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Press Release #1 Critique Appreciated Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT <![CDATA[As I looked at it again, I see w]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673864 <![CDATA[The goal is to let people know t]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673863 <![CDATA[I have to agree. As I made edit]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673862 <![CDATA[Hi Katt33--I guess my concern is]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673861 <![CDATA[I will defenitely make the chang]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673860 <![CDATA[ Caterina Fashions & ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673859 <![CDATA[Caterina Fashions & Beauty I]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm Mon, 1 Jan 2007 19:56:18 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Press-Release--1-Critique-Appreciated.htm#673858