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		<title>Please review my site </title>
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		<description>Please review my site </description>
		<lastBuildDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</lastBuildDate>
		
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				<title><![CDATA[Functionally the site is great.&]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-review-my-site-.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Functionally the site is great.&#160; It is not visually pleasing.&#160; You might want to make general categories, or have the categories be displayed on a second page, not your initial landing page.&#160; Look at Microsoft`s clip art site and you will se[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  
    
      Dear Mojo 456,]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  
    
      Dear Mojo 456,
      I am very new to Web Site development and building, however, as I read through your site, I found it informative,]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  
First, your homepage is fa]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  
First, your homepage is far to busy and definitely needs to be cleaned up.&#160; There is just too much going on and when the page first loads your visitor is bombarded with a lot all at once.&#160; Don`t try to reinvent the wheel, take a look ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  The text is too small... and]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  The text is too small... and like trying to read the phone book.
  &#160;
  "Book keeping" should be spelled "bookkeeping" (in your menu).
  &#160;
  I think the site would be more useful if the list]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[It`s not that attractive. There ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[It`s not that attractive. There too much text going on everywhere. Add some pictures, some amazing graphics. ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hello!&#160; You have a lot of i]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hello!&#160; You have a lot of info on your site!&#160; I`m a very visual person and the first thing I noticed was that it was lacking pictures.&#160; The biz banners floating by were cool because you see these recognizable businesses and their logos.&#160[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  This site has been you more ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  This site has been you more than a year. My brother and I created it and are still learning alot. We are now working on SEO and CSS. So please remember this when you critique it. 
  We wanted a easy to use site that would help you find]]></description>
				<pubDate>Sun, 22 Mar 2009 7:13:04 GMT</pubDate>
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