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				<title><![CDATA[hi,
I think it looks plain. I`m]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[hi,
I think it looks plain. I`m looking for a designer and as a customer it does not grab my attention. Maybe more color or graphics. I`m sure you do great work, but it was hard to tell by the site. 
aaron]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 4 Jul 2007 0:18:19 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[thank you for all your comments.]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-review-Website.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[thank you for all your comments.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 4 Jul 2007 0:18:19 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I`d suggest using correct, conci]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I`d suggest using correct, concise grammar.&nbsp; For instance, this sentence in particular is difficult to read due to improper comma use and wordiness:&nbsp; "In the times that we are living, where there are many good competitors
you can’t afford not [...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 4 Jul 2007 0:18:19 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I`m usually the last person to s]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I`m usually the last person to suggest a "pretty looking site", but for graphic design, I`d expect to see a little more flair and elegance on sites who proclaim to be in the graphics media business.
The person most likely coming to your site is ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 4 Jul 2007 0:18:19 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thank&nbsp; you&nbsp; for your c]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-review-Website.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Thank&nbsp; you&nbsp; for your comments.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 4 Jul 2007 0:18:19 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I am no expert, but here is what]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I am no expert, but here is what I see.You use far too many negatives in your text: "Brands are not just for big  companies", "
        First I will tell you what graphic design is not", "More information on why I don` t pro]]></description>
				<pubDate>Wed, 4 Jul 2007 0:18:19 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Please review my Website.
I mad]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Please review my Website.
I made it very simple. Wanted to make it more SEO friendly.
&nbsp;
http://www.hgraphicmedia.com]]></description>
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