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		<title>Please professionally critique my new website, YOUR opinion counts!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[The design works.&#160; It is no]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[The design works.&#160; It is not apparent what the goal of your business is.&#160; Can you sum up in 1-2 sentences what you do and how it will help someone who has just landed on your site?
There is too much "happy talk" on the homepage.&#160]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[A few quick thoughts on the webs]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[A few quick thoughts on the website:nice header visuals and logo.content within content area, a little stodgy in layout/look - doesn`t seem to match the site`s header, visual beginningswhy don`t you use paragraphs (instead o]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  In addition to the previous ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  In addition to the previous posts.....
  &#160;
  The "description" meta tag is missing which is important for various search engines.
  &#160;
  The site does not seem to be indexed by MSN Live sear]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi there! Thank you for giving u]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi there! Thank you for giving us the opportunity to take a look at your website and help critique! It is quite a nice site. Yet I did catch a few things! I hope my suggestions help you out! Besides the second logo (which I wont dare mention again because [...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Its a good looking site! The]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Its a good looking site! The border is very attractive and compliments the logo well. Here are a few things I saw that you should look at. The second paragraph on the home page is poorly written. This is in a very prominent position and is the fir]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  I like it. Except i agree re]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  I like it. Except i agree remove the second logo and if you could move some product to the left or fill in the left area, that would be great! Also i think if you play around with blending the actual products boxes to the other part of the site.. ]]></description>
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Dittos on the second logo. I`d]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Dittos on the second logo. I`d shrink the top logo, then align the
navigation tabs to the logo and move the whold page up. The empty
space where the second logo used to be, then could be used to display
your product picture, which currently are below [...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I agree about that second Logo. ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I agree about that second Logo. Why make readers scroll down so far to see your offering when you can remove the logo and center all of your text? This would pull eveyrthing up about a third of the page, making it more reader-friendly.
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				<title><![CDATA[Get rid of the second logo on th]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Get rid of the second logo on the main page; it serves no purpose, crowds your content to the right, and makes everything look off balance.
The bottom of your testimonials page has a medical disclaimer; you need to make this more prominent.]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Nice looking site!
From a legal]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Nice looking site!
From a legal perspective, I would STRONGLY recommend adding comprehensive terms of use and a privacy policy to your site.&#160; The terms of use will not only afford you protection with respect to what users can, and cannot ]]></description>
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