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				<title><![CDATA[
  Take out the periods after "]]></title>
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  Take out the periods after "F" and "A" in "FAQ," add an address somewhere on the site to prove legitimacy, and definitely cut down on all those exclamation points. 
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				<title><![CDATA[I would take out the ! after sta]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I would take out the ! after start your own blog today. And I think that intro paragraph on the front page needs work, but otherwise I think the copy is fine.
I might even take out that welcome box, bump up the featured listings, and put the "]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I like the layout and the flow a]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I like the layout and the flow and the idea. What I don`t like as much is the text. I`m a freelance writer and the excessive use of exclamation marks gives your text a less than professional `read`.
You can`t emphasis everything. This is akin to TYP]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi, I was wondering if I can get]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi, I was wondering if I can get some critiques for my new website. I just launched it in the middle of March, its called MyDivorceSales.com, it is a free selling site for couples that are divorced to sell their ]]></description>
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