Please critique my press release http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-critique-my-press-release-2012-07-08.htm Please critique my press release Sun, 8 Jul 2012 4:14:38 GMT <![CDATA[Hi, this is my first post here! ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-critique-my-press-release-2012-07-08.htm Sun, 8 Jul 2012 4:14:38 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-critique-my-press-release-2012-07-08.htm#792312