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		<title>Please critique my website</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[For the home page, the paragraph]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[For the home page, the paragraphs are too wide, no margins, and really small font.I would recommend CookieMonster`s little lesson on copywriting ... can someone link for the OP?My first impression is this ... where do I go now? I actually h]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Well, basically your site is not]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Well, basically your site is not set up as a usable e-commerce site.I`m an artist and my usual website critique focuses on colors, layout, imagery and navigation.  I can`t even start there because the entire setup of your site n]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks onlineeater I will make c]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-critique-my-website.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Thanks onlineeater I will make changes.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[The page was slow to load and th]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[The page was slow to load and the camera picture is too small. On the about us section you provide your contact info. Have a seperate contact us area for that and tell people about your business. On the front page give people a reason to stay at your site [...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks ElidS!!, I appreciate the]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-critique-my-website.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Thanks ElidS!!, I appreciate the feedback. I will take it into consideration and make the necessary changes.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I am not a designer so read what]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I am not a designer so read what I say with that in mind.The color scheme makes it difficult to read, black on blue is not a good combinationThe font size is too small You need to populate the site, but you know that]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi,
I`m an up and coming busine]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi,
I`m an up and coming businessman and I designed a site that sells cameras. I really want this to take off so any feedback will be appreciated.
www.acdigicamdirec]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 16 Feb 2007 20:56:56 GMT</pubDate>
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