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		<title>Please Critique OnMyCity.Biz</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Where? I went to washington and ]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Where? I went to washington and it was fine. I also took off cities for now anyways.&nbsp;
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				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Your Washington, DC links are ei]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Your Washington, DC links are either broken or don`t show up....the comma`s causing the problems.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
I see 5 bullet points, about h]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[
I see 5 bullet points, about how to operate the site, but I don`t see your five reasons I would benefit: (As you said last page)

5 things my business can do for you.

  Increase your visibility loc]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Ok. As far as content goes I rea]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Ok. As far as content goes I really only have the 5 titles, they I have latest posts then featured cards so when you talk about too much content are you talking about the latest posts and featured cards, i should ace those and change the 5 titles to the 5 [...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Ah...okay, then sorry for taking]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Ah...okay, then sorry for taking it the wrong way.

Here`s the deal: You could divide your site in half, horizontally, and
put a line between the business card graphics at the top, and the
content section below.

The graphic secition ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I asked that because I was think]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[I asked that because I was thinking about changing it if it did not make sense.&nbsp;
]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[:-) Uh gee...yeah, I actually do]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[:-) Uh gee...yeah, I actually do.&nbsp;
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				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Do you understand the biz card a]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Do you understand the biz card and bizprofile graphic on top?&nbsp;
]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[In the above post of listing 5 t]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[In the above post of listing 5 things, I understood that! :-) How come
you don`t have a nice, clean home page that lists those 5 things? Then
you could have a lead-in to an article about each of those, where you
show 1-2 paragraphs, then a "Learn more..[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Ok I`m looking at my statistics ]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Please-Critique-OnMyCityBiz.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[Ok I`m looking at my statistics and 75% is staying 0-30 seconds :( That tells me my home page is not enticing enough... Suggestions? Do I lose the big graphic and place less content or change what the graphic says? You asked me to look at s]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jul 2007 11:33:40 GMT</pubDate>
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