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		<title>Please CRITIQUE our site and thank you for your effort!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Thanks, NHGNIKOLE, for the f]]></title>
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  Thanks, NHGNIKOLE, for the feedback.&#160; Greatly appreciated!&#160; We`ll be working on it.
  &#160;
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				<title><![CDATA[I looked at the actual product p]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I looked at the actual product page, as requested ..
and the problem is a matter of just talking about things instead of talking about your buyer. The text itself isn`t too bad, but you talk about how "many people don`t know they have it". Thi]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[If your target viewers are the g]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[If your target viewers are the general public, it isn`t easily understandable just what you do. If you were not in your industry and read your main page text, would ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Yes... I am 100% with CraigL.
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				<description><![CDATA[Yes... I am 100% with CraigL.
When I went to your web site (which is not bad, if you coded it yourself) but if you paid a designer to design it "GET YOUR MONEY BACK".
Here is the thing, you need to separate the Pharmaceutical part from ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[First of all, I`m not getting wh]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[First of all, I`m not getting what it is you do, much less what you
offer. Are you a lab, a research company, a manufacturing company?

Here`s something you could look at that sort of highlights the problem. Right now you have this as your Visio]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  We just launched the site a ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  We just launched the site a couple of weeks ago.&#160; We develop both prescription pharmaceutical products and non-prescription skin care products.&#160; Below is the landing page for the skin care product that general public could buy.&#160; We ]]></description>
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