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		<title>PLEASE CRITIQUE MY SITE foggythecloud.com</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[I&nbsp;think if you follow some ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I&nbsp;think if you follow some of the advice above you`ll be a lot better.&nbsp; Not to hurt your feelings but I think your site could benefit from some professional help.&nbsp; I imagine you did it yourself and, for a first effort, it`s ok.&nbsp; Since y[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I bet you have a cool story behi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I bet you have a cool story behind the whole purpose of the Foggy character and the idea for the website.&nbsp; You should write up a quick intro detailing your story and what compelled you to create the site and the CD`s.&nbsp; Put that on your homepage f[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[The primary question I have is r]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[The primary question I have is review for what - with the best possible intentions, I would point everyone in the direction of two great topics started on "how to get a good critique" (hint: takes more than simply saying - critique my website):from]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Nikole`s said it all. Make the]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Nikole`s said it all. Make the DVD images clickable, and put in a menu
bar to the left instead of the "click here for this or that extra
information."

As for clicking AGAIN to see this information, that`s not good. AND I
don`t want to have ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I wouldn`t put "foggythecloud.co]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I wouldn`t put "foggythecloud.com" at the top ... just the actual name.Take out this:
This is my logosphere, my logo.&nbsp; I created it.&nbsp; I sweat over it.&nbsp; Don`t take
                     it.&nbsp; Don`t]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[PLEASE CRITIQUE MY SITE. foggyth]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[PLEASE CRITIQUE MY SITE. foggythecloud.com&nbsp; Thanks. foggy]]></description>
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