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		<title>Not really a critique, more of a question</title>
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				<title><![CDATA["... and implies a larger organi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA["... and implies a larger organization than one person."
I always use "we" because though I do 90% of the work myself, I generally hire a helper to go with me to a project.&#160; So, "we" applies from the perspective of the client.]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Go for personal! I am in a simil]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Go for personal! I am in a similar situation with a one-gal show jewelry business. I just changed my content to read `I`. People who know me, know that I`m a solo-prenuer, were appalled that I was initially passing myself of as a `we`. I`ve decided to stic[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Too many people use a pseudo "fr]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Too many people use a pseudo "frequently asked" questions page with
questions few people would ask. It just looks fake. On technical sites
I visit, or those that involve running an application, I can see the
need for questions---tech support. But for a [...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[PS, Craig, why don`t you like FA]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[PS, Craig, why don`t you like FAQ pages? Mine is essentially an "About Us" page but addressing the specific concerns I`ve heard from jewelry customers in a more organized format. ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  You could write your entire ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  You could write your entire Web site without any pronouns at all, other
than those referring to the customer. Then, on the "About Us" page,
which specifically means a personal bio or autobiography, change the
POV. At that point, if there`s only ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[



Here`s another approach,]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[



Here`s another approach, because this topic has come up a couple of
times previously. Let`s set aside the issue of widespread stylistic
procedure for the moment.

What`s the]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hey Bekka.&#160; It looks like C]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hey Bekka.&#160; It looks like Craig and I somewhat disagree about the I/we language.&#160; So I just wanted to say I hope we`re not confusing the issue for you.&#160; There really is no right or wrong approach, just personal preferences.&#160; Go with you[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Who says using "we" is standard?]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Who says using "we" is standard?&nbsp; Just because
many people do it doesn`t mean it is "standard style" in
business.
Most style manuals and journalistic systems that I`ve seen. And yes, a
"style" is exactly that...a ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I think you should want to be pe]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I think you should want to be personal, not avoid it.&#160; Here`s a phrase from your copy, "... takes great pride in creating truly unique pieces for each client."&#160; That sounds like a very personal experience working with you.&#160; Capitali]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Alright, here is my compromise s]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Alright, here is my compromise solution so far. I am avoiding "I" OR "We" in the first page introduction, and keeping it third person. All of the other pages I`ve rewritten to avoid personal pronouns except "you." The FAQ page, since it is written in a Q a[...]]]></description>
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