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				<title><![CDATA[It feels a bit, homegrown. I thi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[It feels a bit, homegrown. I think I`d look at a wordpress solution and expand upon it for an informational site such as this.&#160; Just an example of something similar. holyc]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 4 Jan 2008 13:08:38 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Like Craig, I have no clue what ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Like Craig, I have no clue what it is you do. People in this field will, so if your target audience gets it, I guess that is what counts in the end.]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 4 Jan 2008 13:08:38 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I liked it, but the Home needs t]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I liked it, but the Home needs to be on the other side. Show samples. It is nothing but words. Show people instead of telling. Loads great.
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				<pubDate>Fri, 4 Jan 2008 13:08:38 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
The biggest problem I see is t]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
The biggest problem I see is that the current writing (i.e.,
copywriting) is too filled with jargon, acronyms, and lingo. For
example, I see that you`re using on your landing page (is that the
About page or the Home page?---you have Home at the far ri[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 4 Jan 2008 13:08:38 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Generous and knowledgeable peopl]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Generous and knowledgeable people: 
&nbsp;
Please review my site at http://www.nuckle]]></description>
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