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		<title>My first business, and first website, feedback much appreciated!</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[You have a registration box on t]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[You have a registration box on the left, but there is really no indication of what a membership offers .... if I sign up, what is the benefit to me?]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks everyone, really apprecia]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thanks everyone, really appreciate all the advice.&#160; Fixed the typo, thanks for the heads up.&#160; I am currently listed in the google business directory, and that`s helped a lot.&#160; I`ve had trouble changing the page title with Joomla, but am work[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 4 Dec 2008 5:05:20 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I think that the little dude wit]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I think that the little dude with the shield brings down the page`s professionalism. It is pixelated and floating there in the middle. Maybe incorporate it into your header. I would also try to incorporate your tagline under you company name a bit better. [...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 4 Dec 2008 5:05:20 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Well, the site is pretty spars]]></title>
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Well, the site is pretty sparse. That`s not bad; it actually can be a benefit. But it seems a bit "too" sparse, I think. 

I think that all you need to spice the home page is to put more header tags in yo]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 4 Dec 2008 5:05:20 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Well, the site is pretty spars]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Well, the site is pretty sparse. That`s not bad; it actually can be a benefit. But it seems a bit "too" sparse, I think. 

You clearly get across the idea instantly! But I wonder if that`s
getting you the visibility you need? Are you listed in]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I like it. I would use p align j]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I like it. I would use p align justify on the text
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				<pubDate>Thu, 4 Dec 2008 5:05:20 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  www.grizzlypaintball.com
  ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  www.grizzlypaintball.com
  
  
&#160;&#160;&#160;&#160; Started the business this last January only using the website, and my garage.&#160; The things i would like to hear feedback a]]></description>
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