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		<title>I&#146;ve redefined my message</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Nikole good. Speak shortly. Clea]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Nikole good. Speak shortly. Clear too.



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				<title><![CDATA[Your headline doesn`t add a lot ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Your headline doesn`t add a lot of value or make a lot of sense.And your subline doesn`t need a colon.Less questions. Just state what you are going to do for me. Bullets.Apparently. Talking. In. Shorthand. Today. GAH! ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Thanks Craig! I was hoping that ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Thanks Craig! I was hoping that you`d be the one to review it. Whenever it was that you came up with your gift for "defining the undefinable" - it really summed up your abilities! I really appreciate your input. I`ll work on it some more.Katie]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi Katie :-) This is very good..]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi Katie :-) This is very good....! Of course I have comments, but
overall, I think you`re making it quite clear what you`re doing.

We`ve had various discussions on other topics, but the bottom line is
that when you`re writing for public consu]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[HI - it`s taken me a few months ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[HI - it`s taken me a few months but I think I`ve figured out what it is that I`m selling! Please check out http://www.helpvirtual.com and tell me if it`s still too convoluted.
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