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		<title>Here is my Press Release....need some comments, please.</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hi Kris,
I`m thinking the headl]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi Kris,
I`m thinking the headline is a little on the long side. Maybe you can make it a bit more concise?
Also, I don`t think the Mother`s Day angle eliminates part of your target audience. If anything, I think you could stand to]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Thanks for the input Melanie]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Thanks for the input Melanie.&#160; Other than customer testimonials, do you think its good to go?&#160; 
  &#160; 
  kris
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Hi Kristen,
  &#160;
  Do ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Hi Kristen,
  &#160;
  Do you have any customer quotes or testimonials you can add to this press release (and your pitches) to provide more credibility?
  &#160;
  Just an extra tidbit...
  ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  I posted this already on the]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  I posted this already on the "Yikes" thread.&#160; Not sure if people were following that thread anymore so here it is.&#160; I am not sure of a few things such as "Mothers Day".&#160; Does that eliminate part of my target audience?&#160; Do I nee]]></description>
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