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				<title><![CDATA[Jay,
I visited your site and ov]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Jay,
I visited your site and overall, I really like it.&#160; I agree with the above feedback in regards to the paragraphs being a little too long.&#160; When rewriting the content, I would look at describing the delicious tasty treats and emp]]></description>
				<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 5:32:42 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Hi Jay, 
  &#160;
  I look]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
  Hi Jay, 
  &#160;
  I looked over your site.&#160; Looks good and easy to navigate.&#160; Only problem I saw though was a lot of&#160;text.&#160; Not only a lot of text, but really long passages.&#160; Try rewriting the tex]]></description>
				<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 5:32:42 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[www.gofericecream.com we are goi]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Help-review-my-site.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[www.gofericecream.com we are going to be updating it for content and I wanted some other people to give suggestions.
Thanks so much,
&nbsp;Your friends from Gofer ]]></description>
				<pubDate>Mon, 25 May 2009 5:32:42 GMT</pubDate>
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