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				<title><![CDATA[Hi Katherine
I am an angel inve]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hi Katherine
I am an angel investor and look at a lot of plans from businesses. There is a fine line between promoting and over-selling your story. However, before you do anything the story needs to be simple and well thought out. Often the best]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I wouldn`t use the term "ballpar]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I wouldn`t use the term "ballpark" to estimate your initial startup costs.&nbsp; This relays to the investors a lack of&nbsp;costs research&nbsp;on your part."The firm seeks funding in the ballpark of $]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2007 11:57:00 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[I have to agree with the above, ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I have to agree with the above, it is very poorly written and the majority of it is more or less unreadable.There are many inconsistencies.... you state that employers will save an average of $200 per employee but then go on to say that you will be]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2007 11:57:00 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Okay, here is a response.&nbsp; ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Okay, here is a response.&nbsp; If I were an investor, I would not invest anything based on this summary.&nbsp; Did you say you got someone to write this for you?&nbsp; A professional?&nbsp; There are spelling and grammar errors!&nbsp; Get them to fix thos[...]]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2007 11:57:00 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[What are asking someone to do wi]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[What are asking someone to do with your summary? It is well written. What have you accomplished with self owned venture?]]></description>
				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Apr 2007 11:57:00 GMT</pubDate>
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