Critique my sales inro on my blog please http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Critique my sales inro on my blog please Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT <![CDATA[fell asleep half way through ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm#737842 <![CDATA[Thank you!  ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm#737841 <![CDATA[ Hi There!! Too wordy to grab]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm#737840 <![CDATA[That is very helpful. Thank you ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm#737839 <![CDATA[ Yikes! That`s an awfully long ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm#737838 <![CDATA[ ]]> http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm Wed, 15 Oct 2008 11:33:49 GMT http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-sales-inro-on-my-blog-please.htm#737837