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		<title>Critique my Elevator Pitch please?</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  I when I attended my first W]]></title>
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  I when I attended my first WBON function they gave me a worksheet to create a 30-sec elevator speech.&#160; 
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  Believe it or not, in the directions it stated 25-words or less...with a "catch" phrase.&#160; To be ho]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[here`s a little revamp...hopeful]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[here`s a little revamp...hopefully incorporating some suggestions:
EdgEvents is a corporate event planning company that specializes in
creating innovative events for businesses using modern marketing ideas
and a fresh]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[here`s a little revamp...hopeful]]></title>
				<link>http://www.startupnation.com/community/orca/topic/Critique-my-Elevator-Pitch-please.htm</link>
				<description><![CDATA[here`s a little revamp...hopefully incorporating some suggestions:
EdgEvents is a corporate event planning company that specializes in
creating innovative events for businesses using modern marketing ideas
and a fresh perspective on emerging]]></description>
				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Apr 2008 23:02:56 GMT</pubDate>
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				<title><![CDATA[Well i was under the impression ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Well i was under the impression that an elevator pitch didn`t necessarily have to be for investors. I don`t really need investors. What i need is something short and sweet that tells anyone i meet on the street, at a networking event, at a tradeshow,&#160;[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Steve,
I wouldn`t use the same ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Steve,
I wouldn`t use the same short message on investors and prospects alike. I coach my clients to develop &amp; practice 
A group&nbsp; "intro"&nbsp; (where they go around the table and give everybody a chance to introduce themselves)]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Unless you are going to the 30]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Unless you are going to the 300th floor I would shorten it in half. 

First, remove all of the "it`s about me" implications from the text, and fix all the passive voice errors.&#160; "Can" should be "Wil]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
  Unless you are going to the ]]></title>
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  Unless you are going to the 300th floor I would shorten it in half. 
  &#160;
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				<title><![CDATA[Kim,
I`ve always interpered the]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Kim,
I`ve always interpered the primary purpose of this forum to be feedback on the elevator pitch aimed at investors.
That being said, when I read your&nbsp;statements - they sound pretty much like what every other event planning busine]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[So here`s a stab at my first ele]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[So here`s a stab at my first elevator pitch...i`d love to hear what you SuNers think.EdgEvents is a corporate event planning company that
specializes in creating innovative events for businesses that are looking to
make an impa]]></description>
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