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				<title><![CDATA[Less is more. Check out a site l]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Less is more. Check out a site like 37Signals. You can go to the site, look around, and know instantly what it`s about. I think the fear is that people won`t get what you`re ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Not a bad start, but needs some ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Not a bad start, but needs some work. I also use officelive, and think that having links at the top makes it flow much better. I am using a 21" monitor, however, so that may change my perspective somewhat.I agree with digitalvision as far as the ac]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Great points, HDean.&nbsp; I agr]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Great points, HDean.&nbsp; I agree with them all and will add a couple things.1) On Firefox 1.5, I see only half of the navigation buttons.2) It needs to direct visitors to what you want them to do - a person from Mars should be able to see wha]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Niel-Honestly- it needs alot of ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Niel-Honestly- it needs alot of work. And I mean alot. I agree with what the other commetor said when he said it`s a 30 second pitch. The first 2 seconds here didnt` make a great impression on me.Your website is actually a great example of all ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Neil,
I think of a homepage lik]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Neil,
I think of a homepage like a 30 second elevator pitch: you`ve got to grab them and bring them in and then get into the nitty gritty once they`re interested.&nbsp; Give your visitors a clear, concise, active one or two&nbsp;liner abo]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Hello Forum: 
Thanks for the In]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Hello Forum: 
Thanks for the Input.
Good luck to one and all.
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