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		<title>&#067;ookie monster, I took into account yoru advice...what do you think now?</title>
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				<title><![CDATA[Yes, I agree with that.&nbsp; I ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Yes, I agree with that.&nbsp; I guess to me I see that what triggers people to make a purchse are either "oh i don`t want to end up like that" or "oh that sounds like a grand idea."&nbsp; If I have fear of something, I will want to take precautions by purc[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
As I said, appealing to fear a]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
As I said, appealing to fear and anxiety is a HUGE money-maker! It`s an
issue of style, and your own personal philosophy. However, if you`re
going to appeal to negative emotions, then Hold That Concept in your
mind as you write. Or hold the positive e[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Right on!! Keep working!! Rome w]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Right on!! Keep working!! Rome wasn`t built in a day.
I strongly advise against negative copy. It`s a really bad idea unless you`re marketing something for which it is completely justified. For example, many chemotherapy drugs contain the follow]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I don`t know if appealing to neg]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I don`t know if appealing to negative vs. positive emotions makes a difference.&nbsp; As far as I`ve seen from successful sites, and plenty of webcopy books, it seems not to make much of a difference.&nbsp; I do think the more I read it, the more I feel, l[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[
Here`s another exercise involv]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[
Here`s another exercise involving writing. Always write the "voting
for" side, and avoid the "voting against" side. In other words, here
are two sentences saying the same thing:

  Never focus on the negative, bad, down-side, and problema]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[yeah, you`ve been very helpful, ]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[yeah, you`ve been very helpful, and you always make me see my copy in a different light!! when I think I`ve got it and I get compliments, I recieve your crticism and I start to see it all differently.&nbsp; Additonally, although our business is going well,[...]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[I`ve provided all the advice I c]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[I`ve provided all the advice I can provide at this point. [Re-read previous post.]]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[well you make a good point about]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[well you make a good point about our positioning. However, at this time, "focusing" on one is impossible.&nbsp; Both segments (administrative and writing)&nbsp;are very successful, and it is impossible to just do without one and let all&nbsp;those team ]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[Instead of:
Secrets to Business]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Instead of:
Secrets to Business Success
Are you tired of working hard but not seeing the fruits of your labor? 


What about:
The #1 Secret to Business Success]]></description>
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				<title><![CDATA[It`s much better but there is st]]></title>
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				<description><![CDATA[It`s much better but there is still far too much text on the front page and a lot of it is unfocused and sort of seems random. [The part where you talk about failing to&nbsp;plan and strategize. What does this have to do with virtual assistants?]&nbsp;T]]></description>
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