we have an established website called margaritatexas.com and recently started selling a restaurant discount card that is good for up to 15% off meal prices to local area restaurants. a portion of all sales go towards local charities. i just wanted to get some thoughts on this page wording, structure, effectiveness. i basically fit this page into the current structure of the existing website.
http://www.margaritatexas.com/card
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I love the colors, graphics and logo.
This part I would make a little larger to make the overall message stand out a little more....
Own the card that everyone is talking about!
Enjoy GREAT restaurant discounts around Texas!
Double check some of the spacing between words; some spots look like multiple spaces instead of single spaces.
You could use some SEO work, but visually I like it.
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M Hall
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International Society of Curmudgeons
This part I would make a little larger to make the overall message stand out a little more....
Own the card that everyone is talking about!
Enjoy GREAT restaurant discounts around Texas!
Double check some of the spacing between words; some spots look like multiple spaces instead of single spaces.
You could use some SEO work, but visually I like it.
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M Hall
Website Critique Community
International Society of Curmudgeons
Very well done site. I am impressed. (I am also from Houston - many years ago - so I recognized most of the street names).
I can`t add anything to your site design, but you might want to highlight that one or two dinners would pay for a year`s membership.
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Steve Mann
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MannMade Digital Video
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I can`t add anything to your site design, but you might want to highlight that one or two dinners would pay for a year`s membership.
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Steve Mann
Internet Videographer
MannMade Digital Video
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