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brent281

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May 06, 2008 3:54 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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we have an established website called margaritatexas.com and recently started selling a restaurant discount card that is good for up to 15% off meal prices to local area restaurants. a portion of all sales go towards local charities. i just wanted to get some thoughts on this page wording, structure, effectiveness. i basically fit this page into the current structure of the existing website.

http://www.margaritatexas.com/card

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May 06, 2008 7:46 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I love the colors, graphics and logo.

This part I would make a little larger to make the overall message stand out a little more....
Own the card that everyone is talking about!
Enjoy GREAT restaurant discounts around Texas!

Double check some of the spacing between words; some spots look like multiple spaces instead of single spaces.

You could use some SEO work, but visually I like it.

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May 07, 2008 12:30 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Very well done site. I am impressed. (I am also from Houston - many years ago - so I recognized most of the street names).

I can`t add anything to your site design, but you might want to highlight that one or two dinners would pay for a year`s membership.

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