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katt33

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Feb 14, 2008 2:51 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I am going to get someone to work on that for me prior to my wholesale launch event. The issue is I am broke, and I really just want it to be a catalog and a directory once I get wholesale clients of where the products can be purchased. I know that has to change.

DaphneN

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Feb 14, 2008 3:26 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Dale:

It does seem like marketing on the internet frequently involves giving away something - I guess the trick is to give only a little sample just to get your name out. Anyway, I think you are very talented and really know how to do an "attention grabber".

Regards,

Daphne Nowell

http://www.businessangelpress.com

DaleKing

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Feb 14, 2008 3:53 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Dale:

DaphneN, I understand what you`re saying, but I`m not some novice - desperate for work trying to get my name out there. I`ve been in marketing for over 20 years. My name is already out there. Also, I already give away plenty of FREE advice on this forum, as well as several others - not to mention the ton of FREE information on my website. However, out of fairness to my own paying clients, I have to draw the line somewhere.

Be that as it may, I thank you for your kind words.

Dale King

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pres

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Feb 21, 2008 11:25 AM ET Quote Report Abuse

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Katherine.

Under `Caterina’s Afternoon for Charity Sale` you should have another line that amplifies this statement; something like, `Proceeds to Benefit XXXXX`. Also, press releasesshould always ahvea quote.

I`ve done PR for a living. Shoot me an email if you need suggestions.

good luck.

katt33

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Feb 22, 2008 3:29 PM ET Quote Report Abuse

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I am postponing the charity event and going to do the wholesale launch event first.

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