Elisa, I think your press release is outstanding! It`s extremely well-written. The only thing I changed was the headline. Your original headline was boring and lacked the all-important WIIFM ("What`s in it for me") factor. Your headline also needed to be more eye-catching and compelling. I hope you like the new headline. By the way, your website could also use some copywriting help - but you`ll have to pay me for that.

Dale King
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FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
Contact:
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Elisa DiVirgilio
Liz @elisascustomcreations.com.
Handy New Invention Adds Flair, Sophistication and Beauty to Ordinary Gift Card Holder
January 31, 2008 - Wayne, NJ - Elisa`s Custom Creations has taken the ordinary gift cardholder and turned it into a multi-use gift in its own right. Elisa DiVirgilio, founder of the handmade gift cardholder firm, announced today the addition of Velcro closures to the stylish, fabric pockets that give them life beyond a gift card presentation. "Career women can use them to hold business cards," she explained, "and grandmothers can proudly produce their latest set of photos. I even know one young mother who fills it with Cheerios for her toddler."
The Wayne, NJ firm was started by Elisa in 2006 in response to the relentless growth and popularity of gift cards. Today, consumers are purchasing gift cards as “real gifts” and they want them to look pretty, expensive and thoughtful!
The right gift cardholder “allows you to create that personalization,” says Angela Thompson, program manager for Christmas for American Greetings. The right gift cardholder, expressing just the right sentiment, helps demonstrate that you put thought into the gift and didn’t just buy any old thing, she says.
“Unlike many gift card packaging products on the market (boxes, tins, cards), these gift card holders embody creativity, craftsmanship, beauty and function and will surely add flair and sophistication to gift card giving,” says Elisa.
For further information, contact Elisa at Liz@elisascustomcreations.com
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DKing1/30/2008 11:37 AM
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