First off I did do it my self. Some of my goal is to get more interest in Linux and Open Source as alternatives in the work places. To show and help business that may have some interest in seeing if it can work for them.
I also want to underline that with how my consulting business can help them even if they have no need or interest in Linux or Open Source products. For example security testing or part time administration. I am not trying to out do IBM yet, but I am slowing working to it.
The type of critique I am looking for is option`s on content, structure maybe flow of page. I know it could use more but more of what? I have thought of including other formats, maybe adding a blog or wiki with information. My technology specially is more how to get content to people then the content it self.
I am trying to keep it simple no fancy flash or java yet, maybe as the business grows I will add them if it will enhance the viewers information. Currently its just me but it would be nice to have the structure in place so if I do partner with others the site can be changed but keep the focus in view. Hope I was able to explain some of what I am trying to create or maybe brand.
The url is http://www.otakusystems.com
Thanks in advance